Diki Maulani

Banyuwangi Women in Political and Social Struggle

Introduction

Banyuwangi women in political and social struggle. Examine Banyuwangi women's political and social struggles, analyzing opportunities, challenges like gender stereotypes & cultural barriers, and support networks for leadership success.

Abstract

Unsustainable tourism growth can result in significant environmental damage, including pollution and loss of resources, which are major contributors to climate change. To ensure the sustainability of tourism, there needs to be a concept that can support this goal, one of which is the concept of green tourism. This research uses a qualitative approach, searching for related literature from academic sources such as books, scientific journals and trusted articles. Banyuwangi's political and social environment offers women a complex and varied range of opportunities and challenges. While there are barriers such as gender stereotypes and cultural barriers that prevent women from occupying leadership positions, there are also networks of support and opportunities for women to succeed.

Review

The title, "Banyuwangi Women in Political and Social Struggle," sets a clear expectation for a focused investigation into gender dynamics and empowerment within a specific regional context. However, the abstract immediately introduces a significant and baffling disconnect. The opening paragraph delves into the issues of "unsustainable tourism growth" and the concept of "green tourism," subjects completely unrelated to the political and social struggles of women as indicated by the paper's title. This fundamental thematic divergence creates profound ambiguity regarding the paper's actual scope and primary argument. Further exacerbating this confusion is the methodological statement, which generically describes a "qualitative approach, searching for related literature," without specifying whether this review pertains to green tourism, women's political struggles, or an unstated connection between them. While the abstract's final paragraph does return to the promised topic of "Banyuwangi's political and social environment" for women, discussing barriers and support networks, its placement after an entirely unrelated opening renders the overall summary incoherent. This abrupt thematic shift and lack of integration between disparate elements strongly suggest either an abstract compiled erroneously from multiple sources or a significant absence of clarity regarding the paper's core objective and contribution. Given the substantial inconsistency between the title and the abstract's opening content, and the subsequent thematic incoherence, this submission requires immediate and extensive revision. The abstract, in its current form, fails to provide a clear, accurate, and concise representation of the paper's content, making it impossible for any reviewer or reader to assess its value or contribution to scholarship. The author must completely rewrite the abstract to align precisely with the paper's stated title, ensuring that all components contribute to a singular, unified, and comprehensible summary of the research. If there is an indeed an intended, explicit, and crucial link between green tourism and women's struggles in Banyuwangi, it must be clearly articulated and justified from the outset; otherwise, the "green tourism" segment must be entirely removed to reflect the paper's actual focus.

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